Primalism Exhibits:

Poster designed for the exhibition:

All members had part in the making of the poster which is why I feel it looks great and is successful relating to our core values of the movement.

One thing I would improve on though is the hands of the girl as it looks invisible. We didn't see this until we printed it big for the mini presentation. I would move the line and cover the hand up. But overall I really like the simple design of the phone which is controlling this detailed drawing of the girl. This clearly symbolises the sense of control this simple device has over our not-so simple life.

As well as that I think the font - taken from Damien Gran's handwriting really works with the piece - as it is personal and visually rough - to give it a sense of character to our movement.

Feedback wise - we had an all around positive ones as our poster linked perfectly to what out core values were about : to be aware that technology is controlling us. Tutors liked the style of our poster had as well as the simplistic illustration. As a group we were very happy with the feedback and want to continue developing the idea and start experimenting with elements for our exhibition.

It's not all about our feedback that helps us learn.

As we looked through other groups posters and went through their movement again, we also got to feedback on theirs, listening to how others feedback on their posters also helped us to see what concepts worked and others needed to improve on. For us, I felt that our core values need to be much clearer, so when it comes to our final presentation we can bullet point them and show how directly they link to our movement and our purposes.

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